tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5585636624084519221.post1317877518892117567..comments2011-07-25T08:57:32.515-07:00Comments on and then there were none.: "Chocolate"Ritama Guptahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10936342101232527724noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5585636624084519221.post-11253140638027529402008-06-05T03:18:00.000-07:002008-06-05T03:18:00.000-07:00we should try gvn chocolates to the terrorists!!!!...we should try gvn chocolates to the terrorists!!!!my world my ruleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05569146118875835904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5585636624084519221.post-71912026128652478512008-05-10T11:21:00.000-07:002008-05-10T11:21:00.000-07:00nice flow. hooks u at the beginning. cld b a bit m...nice flow. hooks u at the beginning. cld b a bit more compact i feel...and handled a bit better in the way the characters could be a bit more developed like i did not get something at one point u write the king himself ordered chocolates and then u say he banned it as if he hated it...so i think there is a break in continuity there otherwise superb execution of a brilliant idea and a worthy tribute to a great workRitayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02726810523349962872noreply@blogger.com